*Declined*Application

[ferrokk]

Your name or alias: Marcus Ginsburg

your age: 16

your location: Stockholm, sweden.

Tell us a little bit about yourself: well im a 17 year old swedish dude who like to hang out with friends , discuss lore (especially troll lore) and play world of warcraft, i am studying in 9th at my school. hmm, think thats pretty much everything. =)

Your character: Fer'rok

Class: Fury warrior

Character proffesions: none atm.

character background: Fer'rok comes from a warrior family of the Frostmane tribe, being renown for their bloodlust and hatred for none-tribe members. he is very strict in the need of preserve frostmane lands in frostmane hands, and would do whatever needed to make it so.

Your WoW history

Your previous guilds and why you left them:

"The tribe of exiles" on Steamwheedle cartel, joined them and very quick got into the rank of warlord bicause they thought i could provide IC millitary tactics and a exciting enviroment. stayed there for about 4 month untill the guildmaster disbanded the guild without a word.

"The darkspear tribe" on DB , i joined them, stayed for a week and left bicause their roleplay was inmature and had very little to do with acctual darkspear lore.

Why have you chosen to apply: i have always had great love for ice trolls, both lore and in-game . when i passed one of your members in orgrimmar i found your name interesting and poked him and asked a little about the guild. it seemed like the kind of guild i've always been looking for so he directed me here and well, now i am making an apply =)

What can we offer you as a guild: i hope that you will give me a fun and exciting enviroment to roleplay in along with great people to play with.

What can you offer us: i think i can provide you with mature roleplay of course another troll in your ranks. i am open for everything you think can help the guild out.

Did you read and accept the rules and codex of conduct thread?

yes i read and memorized it.

thank you very much for reading my application, looking forward your answer!

[The Primal]

Hello Marcus,

Thanks for your interest in our guild. A few things:
-Are you 16 or 17? You seem to have put both up
-Your character's background story is quite too short. As you like troll lore, I'd like to see you put a bit more effort to this. The current description is very vague. It does not even define your troll's age or tell much of his personality. What is his greatest achievement? Is he religious? does he have siblings? etc, etc- All these kinda things help us define whether or not you are what we're looking for

I'm not letting any possible new member to take easy routes when applying- the application should always be something you put a lot of effort into, as we want to be sure our members bring much love in this guild.

Hoping to hear from you soon-
(and other members are of course free to type their thoughts here as well)

/Primal Zorita

Ps. if you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask. You may post here or contact me or shyrendora (officer) ingame, but the forum might be quickest.

[Ferrokk]

Jun 3, 2010 21:12:31 GMT 1 @ferrokk said:

Your name or alias: Marcus Ginsburg

your age: 16

your location: Stockholm, sweden.

Tell us a little bit about yourself: well im a 16 year old swedish dude who like to hang out with friends , discuss lore (especially troll lore) and play world of warcraft, i am studying in 9th grade at my school. hmm, think thats pretty much everything. =)

Your character: Fer'rok

Class: Fury warrior

Character proffesions: none atm.

character background: Fer'rok comes from a warrior family of the Frostmane tribe, being renown for their bloodlust and hatred for none-tribe members. he is very strict in the need of preserve frostmane lands in frostmane hands, and would do whatever needed to make it so. his hate for none frostmanes comes mostly from the fact that he's father Ver'nukk has tolled him about them as weaklings and cowards, something that Fer'rok disgusts. these storys / rumours has passed down generations and been tolled since fer'rok was just a child. so bicause of that he is almost fanatic in his hatred.
he's family is made up by him, his father Ver'nukk and he's mother tzu'lah, he is the only child. fer'rok is 33 years old and follower of the loas, he is also a cannibal and feast on he's slain enemies. being friendly and polite to thos who replys it he is a very kind and warm person, although somewhat hot-tempered.
he enjoys hunting and martial training.


Your WoW history

Your previous guilds and why you left them:

"The tribe of exiles" on Steamwheedle cartel, joined them and very quick got into the rank of warlord bicause they thought i could provide IC millitary tactics and a exciting enviroment. stayed there for about 4 month untill the guildmaster disbanded the guild without a word.

"The darkspear tribe" on DB , i joined them, stayed for a week and left bicause their roleplay was inmature and had very little to do with acctual darkspear lore.

Why have you chosen to apply: i have always had great love for ice trolls, both lore and in-game . when i passed one of your members in orgrimmar i found your name interesting and poked him and asked a little about the guild. it seemed like the kind of guild i've always been looking for so he directed me here and well, now i am making an apply =)

What can we offer you as a guild: i hope that you will give me a fun and exciting enviroment to roleplay in along with great people to play with.

What can you offer us: i think i can provide you with mature roleplay of course another troll in your ranks. i am open for everything you think can help the guild out.

Did you read and accept the rules and codex of conduct thread?

yes i read and memorized it.

thank you very much for reading my application, looking forward your answer!

[The Primal]

Hello again, and sorry for the delayed answer.

After discussing with my guild we have come to the conclusion that we find your background story to be still too short, much too short. We'd expect you could easily write a wall of text as you are a lore fan and I don't really see enough effort in this right now. Please understand that your application is the only way we can get any idea what kind of roleplayer you are. You also seem to be a little bit on the young side -which is not a problem as long that you are mature and you are able to communicate. Sometimes our roleplay can be graphic, or deal with issues that can be, by some, seen as harsh or inappropriate. I want to give you a heads-up on this so you know such things might happen as you are not of age. Very hard not to sound patronizing, I know, but I find it only fair that I do notify my applicants of this Then we are all on the same page.

With this long droning coming to an end:

I am having a hard time deciding whether or not you'd be happy with the Frosties. I'm unsure if this is the guild for you, so in all fairness, we are willing to give you one more chance to pick up your background story and to take our breath away We'd really want to see an effort this time (no pressure, huh?) so please, if you are uncertain, ask for our guidance. It is perfectly fine to do this, we don't mind at all. We understand it can be difficult to write a background story for us as we have our own lore (the Loa). What you could do would be to leaf around the applications the others have written and get a feeling of what kind of thing we are after. You could also write a story that gives a better picture of your character's personality.

Also, please check your grammar as it makes a easier read for us, the lazy trolls...

Kindly,
The Officer Team

[The Primal]

As you have applied to SGE, I am forced to decline your application. I wish you all the best with the jungle Empire.

//Primal Zorita