Mazoc's Application *accepted*

[Mazocs application]

Hello frostmane guild. my name is Caspian i am 17 and i live in London. i have been looking for a decent troll only RP guild for some time now and RP a troll hexxer on the server Argent dawn. This is my first char on defias brotherhood and i am lvling a char on this server for the sole reason of RP in this guild.

Character info:
Name: Mazoc

Class: Rogue. combat spec. (I should mention that this char is lvl 6 at the moment so i will not be able to get to Dun Morogh for a while)

Professions: Herbalism. Skinning. Cooking.

Backround: (sorry if it's a bit long i copied it from something else and didn't have the heart to edit it)
Mazoc was a young hunter checking his traps when he saw the billowing green smoke rise from the west. Intrigued he headed towards it. He had not gone far until he saw a small ragtag group of the little things that called themselves gnomes. They were weak and injured but the one thing they all had. Was fear.
Mazoc decided to have some fun. He hid in a tree that the group of gnomes were heading towards and threw an axe into one of their skulls. Killing the little creature instantly. Too easy he thought too himself as the survivors squealed and ran as fast as their little legs would take them. As he followed them, hiding in the shadows. He started playing games with them as he killed them.
He chased them but deliberatly didn't catch them so that they would split up. Only when they were alone and exhausted would he deliver his merciful strike. Mazoc hunted them for days, not even going back to his tribe. Their Fear made him happy. So he would stick their slain friends heads on sticks and tricked them into running towards them. Or he would give them false hope by chasing them into a cave where they though they were safe. Then sealing it up with a rockslide. Mazoc hunted them all until there was only one bleeding young female left. Mazoc hunted her slowly savoring every second and when she finally collapsed of loss of blood onto the snow. Mazoc raised his dagger high ready to plunge it into her throat. But he couldn't do it. He loved hunting, chasing, scaring the, so much that he could not kill the last one.
So he let her live.


I have been in other troll only RP guild but none of them really grasped the savage barbaric feel that i want with a troll. (I am not looking for a Silvermoon inn tea party)

Your guild can offer me good troll RP in a secluded mountain pass... I am also interested in this D&D storyline aspect that you mentioned on the forums since it sounds like it could put another dynamic into RP.

What i can offer you however is a relaxed, active guild member who is relatively seasoned at RP.

[The Primal]

Hello Mazoc!

Firstly, the Frostmane Hold thanks you for applying. There are a few things I need to point out in this application. Firstly, we appreciate the use of the correct application template for easier reading. That way, we don't miss any information we need. Also, I'd like to point out the importance of checking your grammar before you post. Miserable, lonely dots and commas make us weep as well as unexplained capitalizing.

Your previous guilds, could you please tell us a little bit about your responsibilities there? And why did you leave the guild/s?

Next, your background. I know this is a very tricky one seeing we are yet to roleplay. Your story gave a feel of your character, but did not tell much of the actual troll. How old is he? What's his personality like? What was his childhood like? What does he want to be when he grows up? Is he content? Miserable? Why? These are the kind of things that we're looking for. But don't worry, I understand that it can be tricky to be the first person to apply seeing you have no clue what we might be looking for. And never worry of the length of your stories, we basically write novels in here!

Then there is the last bit that casts some clouds of doubt over me. You are slightly younger than we'd generally wish our players to be. However you seemed nice and polite when we discussed and I give A for effort so going to let that one slip.

Have you read our codes of conduct, and do you accept them?

In my opinion, if you are able to come up with a more detailed background, I'd be willing to let you in for a trial. However, waiting to see what other members think as I pretend to listen to the opinions of other's, teehee! ;D

Be Well,
Smenkhara

[ozena]

Hi Mazoc!

Thank you for the application!

I will have to stick with what Smenkhara said about dots, commas and capitalizing but otherwise I found your backround story enjoyable. So don't let the grammar-issue discourage you!

But yes, after seeing a slightly improved application I would be more than happy to have you here and start RP'ing with you!

I'm looking forward to hear more from you!

Ozena

[Mazocs]

Greetings frostmane guild!

Concerning the grammar issue i apologize since it was late and i pretty much thought the story up there and then. I do check my grammar when i RP ingame though.

This is my first character on defias brotherhood and i haven't been in any of it's guilds. My main RP character on argent dawn was in the cult of the raptor but i left since i found it too large and most of the good RP was done in smaller groups. My responsibilities within the cult of the raptor were never big. I reached a reasonable rank, not anywhere near officer but i did occasionally interview recruits before they saw the guild master.

My background hasn't really been though out in much detail since my characters usually grow as i play them but i will give you some information.
Age: 19
Personality: Mazoc is a generally sullen and withdrawn young troll. Whenever the tribe are feasting or enjoying festivities you can see Mazoc sitting slightly further away from the group.
He stands still but his piercing eyes dart around, constantly observing his surroundings with an almost paranoid fervor. His dark blue hair is tied up in a topknot so to keep his long hair out of his eyes when hunting. He is dressed in warm boar hide leathers with jagged daggers hanging from his waist and throwing axes in a satchel. Mazoc has a great and protective respect for his elders and superiors and often takes first impressions of people very seriously. Although Mazoc can seem unsociable or even rude at times he is fiercely loyal to those he counts as friends and sees betrayal as the most pathetic and cowardly thing a person can do.

Thank you for the kind comments about my age i assure you it won't be a problem.

I have read the codes of conduct and accept them.

Hope to RP with you in the near future,
Mazoc

[ozena]

Looking better already! Your effort with the application has managed to convince me I'm willing to accept you to the guild but we need more opinions!

What do the others say?

[The Primal]

Indeed, this looks very much better now! Well done, Mazoc! Because miss Ozena does not object, I hereby accept your application. Welcome to your trial month! When you can, contact Zorita, Smenkhara or Ozena for the guild invite -and if we're not online, anyone else as they might be able to summon us officers online.

I am also accepting you as a member on our forums so you should be able to read all the posts. I suggest getting familiar with out lore first. With any questions, doubts or other issues do not hesitate to contact any Holdie.

Welcome!

[Drukha]

Firstly: Hello, and welcome to the guild!

And, you've been in the Cult of the Raptor? Fancy! I've only heard good about that guild, seen some events up on the Event forums etc. I actually did an attempt to try to level a Troll on Argent Dawn to join them, but I missed the DBers too much. *grins*

Once more; welcome!

[mazoc]

Hello and thank you for accepting me into your guild! I am honored to be the first member to have joined via application.